This story was written by my niece Tiffany. She needs to practice her story writing skills for the 4th grade Florida FCAT Writes. Students are graded on their creativity rather than focusing on spelling, which comes in the later grades. My spelling corrections (*) will appear at the end of her story. Over the summer months I will be sending Tiffany the word prompts so that she can participate in FSF through me. The thought for the story was hers and we developed it over about 1 hour. She typed it up and found the picture to go along with her story. Thank you for granting me this little deviation from the normal process. Next week we'll both have a FSF story. Hope everyone has a wonderful weekend.
Tiffany's first Five Sentence Fiction
The Busted House
"Are Brandon and Weenie still calling each other gay?"
"Probably, but Brandon is teching* Weenie how to drive Dumpy (backhoe) and Dozey (bulldozer)."
"I would be fritin* they would run me over, or brack* the machines."
"I will pretet* you by holding up five fingers, that means
"I still think they are going to crash into the new house!"