Sunday, June 30, 2013

Tiffany's 2nd Five Sentence Fiction

My View


I climb up a mountain and I see everything in sight.

Nature calls to me and says, "look at the view".


I see deer, clouds, mountains, sometimes snow and our new home.



My room is upstairs so I can see clear from there.


The view is so awesome I might move in there some day.

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Written by Tiffany, my 9 year old niece.



18 comments:

  1. I really like this a lot! Well done.
    (I had trouble with the link, so entered through the web address.

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    1. She did do a great job. By the way thanks for letting me know the link wasn't working. I've corrected it.

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  2. She doesn't write like a 9-year-old! Good for her! Gorgeous photos too. I recall often saying "I want to live there one day."...wherever there happened to be. Always beautiful and peaceful. Very special writing.

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    1. She does have a unique way of seeing things doesn't she. I agree, I say the very same thing when I am somewhere different.

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  3. Very lovely! Make sure she keeps writing!! :)

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    1. Tiff is having fun with this and loves all the positive comments. I hope that she will continue, just because...like we all have. Thanks for stopping by.

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  4. Very nicely done, especially at only nine years old! At that age, I would have be petrified to have my work out there where others could read it - I still am to a degree. The pictures are great, too!

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    1. I don't think she realizes just how many folks can see what she writes. She loves all the comments and it is blowing her up. She can't wait for the next word prompt. All this will help her in the writing skills portion of the Florida FCAT which she must pass to advance to the next grade level. Thank you for making a 9 year old smile!

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  5. Great job!I love how she told us the things she sees and the pictures are beautiful.

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  6. Amazing! and the pictures are lovely! ;)

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  7. Beautiful pictures with beautiful words from a beautiful girl! I'm co-hosting THE Collective Social Blog Hop this week. If you want to grow your blog and/or meet new friends please stop by at http://mamainheels.com/2013/06/30/the-collective-social-blog-hop-co-hosting/

    xo,
    Janise
    http://MamaInHeels.com

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    1. Hi Janise,
      Just joined the Collective Social Blog Hop via your page. I haven't had much success with this blog hop in the past. Looking forward to meeting some new ladies. Thanks for stopping by and for the invite.

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  8. This is so beautiful! I wish I was there.

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  9. Amazing photographs!

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