What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
This week: WORDSRazors cutting into my soul.
Brain spinning in a frenzy, attempting to grasp the consequences.
Heart plummeting with an ache so deep I have to stop myself from crying out.
Stripped of my self worth.
This, my body's response to Your words...
Beautiful!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ellen. Your support means loads to me. This challenge was easy. I think that as women we have all felt this way at one time or another...unfortunately.
DeleteI'm a Snapdragon too! :)
DeleteNo wonder we like each other and get along so well, despite the hurdles that have been thrown in our paths. xxx
DeleteWell written, but so sad.
ReplyDeleteAgreed it is sad. It's what immediately came mind.
DeleteA very vivid description of how words can destroy even the strongest person and how vicious words can be, told in such a sad, heartbreaking,succinct way. xxx
ReplyDeleteThanks Lizzie. I don't know why these dark thoughts came to mind. It's deep, but even though fictional, I'm sure many people suffer like this on a daily basis. Thanks for your comments, I appreciate it.
DeleteYes, Barbara. I will take "sticks and stones" any day over hurtful words. Beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much. I appreciate your comment.
DeleteBarbara, this is just beautiful. Lyrical symmetry with a punch. Nicely done...
ReplyDeleteThank you Britton. I debated over the words. I wondered if the story was too painful. In the end I'm content that I decided to share it.
DeleteI absolutely adore the way you conveyed such a visceral ache with so few words! Stunning.
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace. Your kind words are appreciated.
DeleteThat's a powerful piece - the pain and emotion very well expressed.
ReplyDeleteI agree it is powerful. It's nice to know that so many folks can appreciate the inner struggle I was attempting to express. Thank you for your comment.
DeleteGreat, Barb. The pain is palpable in your writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy. Your piece was in a place of honor this week. Awesome job!!!
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