Sunday, April 21, 2013

An Invitation


What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
This week: ANGLES

An Invitation
Meet me at 11:00 p.m. at the Edgeview Inn
Bring your open mind and a clear conscience.

Leave your inhibitions behind and be ready to explore your secret fantasies and dreams
Senses on full alert, we'll connect our bodies and souls soaring to new levels of pleasure.


Tell no one!

12 comments:

  1. Barbara - I think this is my favourite one this week. Brilliant! xx

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    1. Awwww...thank you ever so much. I live your words too!!!

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  2. WONDERFUL WONDERFUL
    As I read it for some reason I began to hear "The Music of the Night" being sung by Michael Crawford from the "Phantom of the Opera."

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    1. Thank you Robin. What a wonderful compliment.

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  3. Brilliant! Funny, sensual, ironic and succinct!

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    1. Thank you for taking the time to describe my little tale with such wondrous words!

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  4. Enticing... a story only beginning? ;-)

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    1. Aha, beginning, continuing or ending...you'll have to use your imagination to figure it out. Thanks so much for your comment.

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  5. Wow!! A lot of emotion in just a few words!!

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    1. Thanks Penny. Five sentences limit how wordy I can be. It allows me to get as much bang from my words as I can. I appreciate the comment.

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  6. Love it! Your story conjures up many feelings.

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    1. Glad you felt them Kathy. There is a lot of emotion happening.

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