Sunday, March 31, 2013

Five Sentence Fiction


What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in your five sentences, just use it for direction.
This week:Flame


 Absorbing the tone and timbre of your voice, your words seep into my brain like a flower sipping rain.  A shivering tingling movement can be felt along my every nerve ending.  Traveling through my body it intensifies and builds until the blush on my face can be seen by everyone.  Warmth envelopes me.  Your words are burned into my heart by the internal flame they created.

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    1. Thanks Ellen, I wasn't sure I should post publicly. I'm a bit wary of how my words may come across. You have such a way of expressing yourself that I respect your opinion. So I'm posting publicly.

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    2. Awe, thanks Barb. Def don't hold back, you write beautifully!!

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    1. Thank you, I appreciate the comment. This was my first try. I'm looking forward to the next FSF.

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  3. Wow, how descriptive. You can feel the passion. Nice post xx

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    1. Thank you so much for your feedback. I appreciate it. I'm a first timer so it's nice to hear.

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  4. Great idea, you are a talented writer!

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    1. Well thank you Anita. I appreciate the feedback. I've always loved the written word and now I can try it out myself.

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  5. Extremely romantic and passionate writing. Absolutely gorgeous. xx

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    1. Thank you, I appreciate that you felt the emotion. This is my 1st time and I am hooked.

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  6. Wow ~ you got a lot across in those 5 sentences. Definite passion. You could actually "feel" the words. Very nicely done!

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    1. Thanks Penny. I appreciate your positive comments. This is my first try.

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  7. What a great idea! That was really beautiful. Never be afraid to share.

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  8. The soft hiss of another bottle opening is heard under the gentle strains of guitars and voices singing in harmony.
    A knowing look passes between friends as they sit under the constant, ageless moon.
    Familiar laughter fills the air.
    A hand reaches out to warm mine.
    I see years gone by and years to come in that one moment

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    1. I love it. I can picture this clearly. You should join.

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  9. How and what do you join? I thought it was something you were doing on your site.

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